# The plain language rewrite that keeps the numbers

Turn a dense paragraph into something a stranger can act on, without losing a single figure, date or name.

## The prompt

```text
Rewrite the passage below in plain language for someone reading it for the first time.

Passage:
"""
<paste the passage here>
"""

Work in three steps and show all three.

STEP 1: LEDGER
List every number, date, name, deadline, price, percentage and condition in the passage. One per line, exactly as written.

STEP 2: REWRITE
Rewrite the passage at a reading level a careful fourteen year old would follow. Short sentences. Active voice. No new claims. Keep every item from the ledger.

STEP 3: AUDIT
Go through the ledger line by line and mark each item KEPT or MISSING in the rewrite. If anything is MISSING, produce a corrected rewrite that includes it.
```

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From Spark, Saturday, 25 July 2026.
Canonical: https://spark.offbrain.ai/drop/plain-language-rewrite-that-keeps-the-numbers
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## Receipt

- Cost: Free.
- Free alternative: This is the free version.
- Tested: 2026-07-25
- Material connection: None.
- The catch: You get three blocks of output instead of one clean paragraph. Read the audit, then keep the rewrite and throw the rest away.